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Old 01-29-2010, 12:22 AM   #1
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Just some back and forth cypher type of track.
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beat is mad ill, I like it and it surely goes pretty well with this kind of track. A nice vybe to it. Your (assuming you're the first guy who starts this track) Lyrics were fukcin' sick, supreb multies all the way through, you didn't tune it down as it goes like some emcees do. I liked a lot of the inners too, and vocabs were too sweet. sick lyricism indeed. Flow was on point, no flaws. Delivery is fluid and energetic, everything was so great.
Second guy was dope too, lyricism was slightly less great, I thought your vocabs and rhyme scheme were tighter. Flow was solid, and delivery was sweet, it could be more energetic though...
I just didn't feel the content, but overall that was mad ill fo' sure...
keep it up...
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the quality needs to be a bit smoother and less bg noise but the beat is dope flow is perfect deliver is nice lyrical is always a high point for you shits nice just work on the quality and you'lll be good
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Yeah Quality need to be up real talk.
Lyrics is always dope for you kurbzz you dont need to worry about that.
Flows nice aswell as the delivery.
Beats dope like i said on msn i need that shit.
Overall a good song just fix that quality.
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LOL. Wolfman needs to find him some punctuation. I read his feedback as one sentence.
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this tracks fuckin dope.... i love this back and forth cypher type style, makes it way more intrestin imo thats why i love al one and onlyones mixtape

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like wolf said.. some of this shit needs to be a lil more smoother.. what i mean by that is the way u spit yur bars over the beat.. it needs to like connect with the beat more.. this wasnt the case throughout the whole thing.. it was mostly just in the beginning.. i personally didnt like the beat but that doesnt really matter.. the lyrics was good.. overall it was a good track

oh and the quality was the major flaw here.. other than that everythin else was good
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Goodlookz.
This is about as good as the quality is gonna get with the mic we use.. plus, the vocals havent been altered in the least... so, meh'... Im not mad at it for some cheap mic.

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Bro... You still needa fix the delivery a bit. There's something about it, it just feels a bit off, though around the "walk on your flow" line it was more on point I felt. I think it's that there feels like a lack of emotion, and switch ups man. I feel derogatory saying it sounds like you're reading because I'm pretty sure you're past that, at least by now, but it doesn't flow as smoothly as I'd hope man.
Gotta love this style of track though, back and forth reminds me of Abs & D-Sisive (Also Canadian) on this track, though maybe not to the same extent.
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Whit Beats That Again..Mad Fresh
Defo Feelin The Back In Forth Shit
Nice Flow And Shit..Bit More Swag Needed
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I mean, I get you with the delivery thing...
but at the time its not what youre thinking about, im just having fun spitting... Plus, the quality of microphone we use to record isn't able to present it well... plus, im sure if we fucked with our levels and mixed it, added some affects, im sure the delivery would come out better.. but again, we don't know that shit. Lol.

So either someone offers for me to send them the accapella next time for THEM to tweak, or this is as good as its gonna get each time.
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Hmm, you just don't sound quite THAT interested.
I guess we need to hit up some producers as our next set of recruits.

You showed your boy Wolf's mixing tut btw? Might up your quality on the cheap.
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My boy isnt quite computer savvy...
Like I said, when it comes down to mixing it.. it would be up to me...
and I don't have any programs to fuck with at my house, and I cant exactly be at dudes house every day.. but meh
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YO!
To add, granted it's not much, I was re-listening to Jay Electronica and one line struck a chord:
"The energy you giving off unfamiliar"
I dunno if it will help, and maybe I can blame it on the alcohol, but the word "energy" made me think of this track, and yeah, basically the "energy" of the joint wasn't clicking with me.
Again, I'm not sure how helpful it is, but I figure any feedback is helpful, even if it's a random thought.
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Not bad, needed more... KAPOW for me. Your lyrics are good you just need some umph from somewhere, more presence in the delivery. Liked the beat and the flow was on point, just a delivery thing for me.
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Dope lyrics! Dope vibe! BUT, quality needs to be upped a lot. I think both of ya'll did your thing. Second guy (I think?) could improve delivery just a LITTLE bit so it doesn't sound a bit artificial, but other than that everything's on point. One of the better tracks I've heard since I came here for sure.

Flow's watered down like it was diet sprite... holla back and stay up.
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man..for someone who just cranks out tunes for a bit of fun you always come out with some DOPEness. lyrically i know what ima be getting from you, always some challenging, technical ish, punchlines etc etc. dope kurbzz. beat was heavy, and the quality didn't even bother me, cos it just added to the authenticity. more please.
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Goodlooks on the listen Doc.
I appreciate how you can look past the quality and just take it for what it is.
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Dope track you definitly killed this track. Quality was not a big deal here the lyrics,flow,punches just killed it. Not much else to feed on, people already said it quality could be better but the rest was just ill.

I would bump this from time to time.
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i thought you picked up on the presence part from your 3rd part.. it really got dope from then on forward, yeah.. you seemed to take control at that point.. you outshined your partners in this one bro lol. you really are becoming a beast on the mic, just a little bit more twitching up to some areas.. and hopefully better quality and then your set lol
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