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Old 02-11-2010, 01:36 AM   #21
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Iight this beats clearly crazy

Lyrically yall came hard but yall got equally sad quality but the emotion n delivery was def in this... good shit tho keep it up

"Walk on ya flow just like jesus did"
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Old 02-13-2010, 08:15 PM   #22
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Pretty sick beat , flows good delivery seems to be tight to me , over all good cypher track 6.10
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Old 02-13-2010, 10:24 PM   #23
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good shit, youre getting better

beat is nuts, id rape that beat raw. who made it?
flow was okay, could be better. youre starting to get a better grasp of the cadence on the beat by cutting down on syllables so you dont have to rush lines, but now youre cutting down a lil too much. like, some of your words, you had to emphasize and stretch a lil too much just to get it on cue, know what i mean? example: something somethin dskgna dyyynnaamite, like that. lol. lyrics were nice tho.

delivery could be a lil better. youre not lackin or unenergetic, but too monotone, youll find your voice eventually tho

keep at it
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Old 02-16-2010, 01:03 AM   #24
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The beat right here is mad Ill, the Flow and delivery You guys are Producing is alright,

Sounding pretty confident, defintly an Appromnt over you're Old Drops,

The audio quality was a bit poor but still, some good lyrics you guys produced,

Overall a pretty sick drop, keep these up, and you'll elavate very quickly.
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